Comments on: Chapter V: Some Normal People

By: Rimca

Rimca — Wed, 29 Oct 2008 05:15:36 +0000

Interesting to know.

By: Pete Myers

Pete Myers — Fri, 15 Aug 2008 20:34:55 +0000

The Evangellyfish begins to turn a darker hue.

Fantastic

By: Tim Etherington

Tim Etherington — Fri, 15 Aug 2008 16:52:37 +0000

Hey! Where’s the next chapter?! Oh, Monday’s. Right.

Grumble mumble grrrr

By: Crystal

Crystal — Thu, 14 Aug 2008 22:29:12 +0000

I am really loving this! I can’t comment on editing, but I can sure cheer on the story!

By: Sam Groves

Sam Groves — Wed, 13 Aug 2008 06:45:42 +0000

Superb stuff. What’s so scary is that I live on another continent (Africa) and I feel like I know these guys!

By: Megan Okimoto

Megan Okimoto — Tue, 12 Aug 2008 17:28:01 +0000

Jeremy,

I know his niece. She spoke like that when she was sixteen. It’s so embarrassing when someone seven years younger than you speaks so much more eloquently. :^) It’s probably all the Wodehouse and Chesterton.

Sandy’s also on the varsity team…Doesn’t that make you at least an upperclassman?

By: Jeremy

Jeremy — Tue, 12 Aug 2008 14:18:11 +0000

How old is his daughter? Her vocabulary is quite sophisticated:

“According to the Lester girls, according to Trey, with Mrs. Jordan vainly trying to get her foot on the brake,” Sandy said.”

By: Jeff Moss

Jeff Moss — Tue, 12 Aug 2008 01:07:44 +0000

“At any rate, the congregation perked up again like a sun-fried plant that somebody left on a deck with full southern exposure while the family went on vacation for two weeks in August, and which an unexpected someone decided to water at just the right time and in the right amounts when they got back.”

Wow. You can have so much fun when you don’t have to take yourself too seriously…

By: Christopher Witmer

Christopher Witmer — Mon, 11 Aug 2008 23:27:10 +0000

Relax, Ruben, it’s a sitcom.

By: Dan Phillips

Dan Phillips — Mon, 11 Aug 2008 23:26:17 +0000

Hey! I DID put in a… oh rats, I guess I used a bracketed p instead of a bracketed br.Sticklebats!